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實用的英語分析作文三篇

在學習、工作或生活中,大家總免不了要接觸或使用作文吧,通過作文可以把我們那些零零散散的思想,聚集在一塊。寫起作文來就毫無頭緒?以下是小編收集整理的英語分析作文3篇,歡迎大家分享。

實用的英語分析作文三篇

英語分析作文 篇1

1.描述圖畫

圖畫作文對圖畫的描述應在第一段進行,且最好在首句即開始。此類作文大部分是一幅圖,也會有兩幅圖出現的情況。如果出現兩幅圖,則很有可能是突顯對比的情況。

圖畫上可能沒有任何文字,也可能在上面出現了一句話,也可以單個人物説話或兩個人物對話,也可能在圖畫外寫了總結性的一句話。大家注意,這一句話或兩句話一般是非常重要的,應予譯出。

一般説來,對圖畫的描寫不必過長,應以簡練、準確為標準。

2.圖畫類作文結構分析

我們想象中的最典型最理想的圖畫題提綱應該是下面這樣:

1. 描述圖畫

2. 推導繪畫者的意圖

3. 做出評論

對於這一提綱我們來做具體分析,其中第三點更要細緻研究。首先由圖畫引出一種社會現象或社會問題,可以是好的,也可以是不好的。在推導繪畫者的意圖時多是展開説此現象或問題的表現,以證明其引人注目。還有一種可能性是説此現象或問題產生的原因,提綱可直接列出,或還用上述提綱。這時可把簡單意圖推導直接放到第一段描述圖畫之後,而在第二段中説原因。

第三段做出評論,有可能只是簡單評論、深化主題就結束,但這種可能性越來越小了。這一部分很可能説的是辦法,不好的事情就是如何解決的辦法,好的事情就是如何進一步發展的方法。

通過上述列表,我們可以看出,多年以來,真實的提綱是怎樣一步步地向我們想象中的理想模式靠近的。對於提綱裏面出現的變化和規律,我們來分析一下。

我們仔細分析,會發現歷年考研真題基本上都呈現"現象或問題--原因解釋--解決辦法"這樣的模式,但變化非常多。因為我們談論的既可以是一件值得弘揚的好事,也可能是一個令人憂心忡忡的社會問題;針對後者我們極有可能需要提出做法;而對於前者,可能解釋一下就結束了,也可能要寫出相應的做法。

綜上所述,可以看出,比起圖表作文來,圖畫作文要更靈活,更富於變化。我們一定要多練習,以達到一看到圖畫(含圖中和圖邊文字)和提綱(有時有文章標題)就能有效地審題解題,構造出合理的具體段落的目的。

這裏面還有個問題,就是舉例子,近年來已明確出現了兩次,這一點大家一定要多練習。

英語分析作文 篇2

一、指代方面的錯誤

在使用代詞it,he,this,that,which,one等時,前文中應出現明確的先行詞。

如:Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future,it is senseless to force him to learn it.,這句話中,him和it這兩個代詞都有明確的先行詞,分別是a child和knowledge,因此句子的含義非常清楚。

可是,不少學生在使用這些代詞時,雖然自己很清楚它們指代的是什麼,但在作文中卻沒有交代清楚,結果這些代詞非但沒有使行文簡潔,反而造成了意思上的模糊,讓閲卷老師不知所云。

誤:Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

正:Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

【説明】句1中的they既可指教師,也可指學生,屬指代不清的。可以把它們中的任意一個改成單數名詞。因為單數名詞也可以泛指一類。

二、修飾方面的錯誤

修飾語應緊靠被修飾的成分,並和它形成正確的邏輯關係。如果修飾語的位置不妥當,就會造出模稜兩可的病句。

誤:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

正:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

【説明】句1要表達的是把有害氣體排放到農村,還是把工廠遷到農村去?顯然修飾語to the countryside的位置放錯了。如句2改變一下結構,就能清楚地表達要表達的意思了。

三、一致方面的錯誤

在一個句子內部或緊鄰的兩三個句子之間,要保持時態、人稱、數等的一致。

誤:Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

正:Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

【説明】代詞應與所指代的先行詞保持人稱和數上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

四、平行結構方面的錯誤

這裏專指語態、比較級、非謂語形式、冠詞用法、可數名詞和不可數名詞、不定代詞單複數以及時態等錯誤。

1、誤:Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

正:narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

誤:A great change has been taken place since then.

正:A great change has taken place since then.

誤:But it may occur some new problems.

正:But some new problems may occur/arise.

誤:Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

正:Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

【説明】happen,take place,occur,arise等動詞和動詞詞組一般既不能用作被動結構,也不能作為及物動詞帶賓語的。但學生作文中類似的錯誤較多:Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

2、誤:The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

正:The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

誤:Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

正:Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

誤:Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

正:Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

【説明】這些都是在使用比較形式時出現的錯誤。尤其是第1例較普遍。如more easier,more stronger等。

五、斷句方面的錯誤

一句句子沒有結束,又開始新的一句,結果造成句子結構不全,這就成為斷句。

誤:TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

正:TV becomes an important part in our daily life,because we cannot live without it.

【説明】以because,since,if等引導的`從句是不能獨立成句的,只能依屬於主句,所以不能寫成另一句。

六、連詞方面的錯誤

作文中缺少必要的連詞,或錯用連詞的現象也比較普遍。

誤:One should improve his English,one should overcome difficulties in studies.

正:If one wants to improve his English,he should overcome difficulties in studies.

【説明】學生在寫作中往往意識不到連詞的重要,不善於使用連詞和連接副詞來明確標示出因果關係、轉折關係、遞進關係等。

七、搭配方面的錯誤

學生作文中用詞搭配方面的錯誤也佔有較大比例。曾經在一次六級作文閲卷中,近千篇作文在表達上海交通越來越擁擠這個意思時,幾乎沒有一篇用 heavier,大多數人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded,而traffic是不能與crowded搭配的。

1、誤:However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

正:However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

【説明】speed只能和high,low,good,top,normal,fantastic,moderate,surprising等搭配,不能與fast,quick,slow搭配。但可以這樣説A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

2、誤:In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

正:In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

【説明】price只和high,low,inflated,moderate,minimum,original,popular,prevailing,published,reduced,reasonable等搭配,不能與expensive,cheap搭配,但可以説In the past,milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

由此可見,要提高對詞語搭配的駕馭能力,除了要在平時的閲讀過程中多積累,還需要克服中文中諸如速度快、價格貴、學習知識、人減少等搭配的影響,避免寫出look book或see book這樣的笑話來。

八、誤用方面

學生作文中對詞語的誤用也相當普遍,誤用詞語不僅不能準確地表達作者的意思,而且也會鬧出笑話。

1、誤:With the industrious development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

正:With the industrial development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

2、誤:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

正:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

【説明】以上錯句都是因為對形容詞的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤勞的,工業上的應為industrial。effect一般用作名詞,其動詞形式表示產生、實現,而這裏的意思是影響,應換成affect。

英語分析作文 篇3

The general age of college students are between 18 to 25 year. From the psychological point of view, it’s in the medium of youth. Some people say that the college students are adults that they handle well with psychological problems. However, the rest argue that college students are not so mature when faced with psychological problems. I agree to the latter and i think it’s necessary to open a psychological lesson to the college students because of the following reasons.

大學生的一般年齡是在18到25之間。從心理的角度來講,這是青年中期。有的人説大學生是成年人了,能夠很好地處理心理問題。然而,剩下的人認為大學生面對心理問題的時候沒有那麼成熟。我同意後者的觀點,我認為向大學生開設心理課是必要的。原因如下。

Firstly, in recent years, there are more and more college students drop out from school due to psychological problems. Growing , homicides and other unusual serious incidents are reported from time to time. Now, the social attention to college students’ mental health has reached to climax. Secondly, college students are in a perplexed and contradictory age. On the one hand, they have to study in school to enrich themselves and to get a diploma. On the other hand, they think they are mature to live an independent life, but most of them still depend on their parents. In addition, study challenge, employment pressure and life stress could produce psychological problems.

首先,近幾年,越來越多的大學生由於心理問題而輟學。越多自殺,謀殺以及其他不正常的嚴重事故時不時有報道。如今,對大學生心理健康的關注已經達到了高潮。其次,大學生處於一個困惑和矛盾的年齡。一方面,他們認為自己已經成熟了,能夠獨立生活,但是大部分仍然依靠父母。而且,學習壓力,就業壓力和生活壓力也會產生心理問題。

To sum up, college students are adults but they are still faced with many pressures causing psychological problems that they can not deal with. Therefore, it’s very necessary to open a psychological lesson to college students, helping them get through this period smoothly.

總之,大學生是成年人,但是他們仍然面臨很多他們不能解決的引起心理問題的壓力。因此,向大學生開設心理課程是有必要的,能夠幫助他們順利度過這一時期。

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