關於書面表達中組詞成句的原則與訓練

書面表達中組詞成句的原則與訓練(五)

五、語言生動

文章要吸引讀者注意，激發讀者興趣，語言就需生動，充滿活力。若想使句子形式多樣、語言生動、內容豐富，就必須通過以下方式對句子加以變化，而不是一成不變地使用“主——謂——賓”或“主——系——表”的句式來表達一切內容。

1、變化詞語表達方式。例：

We are preparing for the coming exam. →

We are getting ready for the coming exam.

2．變化句型。例：

I’m sorry not to have answered your letter earlier. →

I’m sorry that I have not answered your letter earlier.

3．變化語序。例：

正裝語序：The thief went away into the forest.

倒裝語序：Away went the thief into the forest.

4．變化語態。例：

主動語態：We happened to meet him in the bookstore.

被動語態：He happened to be met by us in the bookstore.

5．變化句子開頭。例：

主語開頭：The radio weather report is very important in the farmer’s life.

表語開頭：Very important in the farmer’s life is the radio weather report.

主語開頭：They finished what they were asked to do in ten days in two.

賓語從句開頭：What they were asked to do in ten days, they finished in two.

6．變化主體和客體。例：

I spent two yuan on the beancurd.(主體是I).

The beancurd cost me two yuan.(主體是the beancurd)

7．變化正面敍述和反面敍述。例：

正面敍述：He likes money best.

反面敍述：He likes nothing better than money.

練習:按括號內的要求改寫下列句子：

may look after her by turns.(用take turns改寫句子)

is never unfriendly to us.(用肯定式表達)

father walked home angry.(用形容詞開頭)

r can be made from wood.(將主體改為wood)

5.I could hardly recognize(認出) him at first.(改為倒裝語序)

參考答案：

may take turns to look after her.

is always friendly to us.

y, her father walked home.

can be made into paper.

ly could I recognize him at once.